Saturday, November 08, 2008

rescue...

Sometimes he is close, sometimes he is distant;
I wake up in the mornings, thinking of him,
I know not if he feels the same for me;
I walk on the streets reminded of  him,
I know not if he ever remembers me;

The innumerabel trials to identify take me no where;
I begin to doubt if this feeling ever wears;
conjectures lead to no conclusions;
I am swaaying in the open waters without ever reaching the coast;
Such is the fix, I pray the deep waters donot suck me in;
Such is the enormity of the task, every passing minute making it difficult to wade through;
Oh Love, please come to my rescue and pull me out of this.

3 comments:

Ranjith said...

Waking up, thinking of him.. captured this feeling very raw.. nice post

By the way, love only immerses people into itself... doesn't pull someone out! :)

Samhita said...

@ranjith yes,love immerses people into itself and in turn pulls one out of uncertainty and confusion.n the later is the inference made in the blog..
nice meeting u here. :)

Unknown said...

..really awesome..poetry...!!Keep it up..!!